I am learning how to: Write to persuade others supporting my key ideas with evidence.
Hey are you someone that is addicted to chocolate?
Well you are about to find out what is in chocolate.
Some people see chocolate as a healthy snack but it can increase your weight and raise your sugar level!!!
First, chocolate has a lot of sugar “ example” if a pregnant woman was eating a lot of chocolate the baby and the mother might get diabetes at the same time.
Second, chocolate has a lot of calories and sugar and that sugar can give you tooth decay and sometimes headache
Third, chocolate is very yummy and it attract people like me it is an enemy to you and your body if you wanted to lose weight then you should not eat chocolate everyday or every hour.
Chocolate can give you diabetes and who knows you might die. Chocolate is actually made out of cocoa. If chocolate is made from milk isn't that both good and bad for you? Its a source of calcium but not in sunny afternoons.
1 comments:
I guest the important thing is to remember to treat chocolate as a treat and not to over do it!
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